Squirrel Narrative

Spiraling up and up with scratching speed,
the squirrels pursued each other around
the rough barked pine faster than my eyes could shift.

I lost them in white sky glare and tangled
needle mass; raucously harsh, screeching calls,
marked them before their leap to a neighbor oak.

The smaller fell, spread-eagle in air;
missed! I thought, but spasms of tail/tick-tock
and tendon/claw snagged a limb-tip easing
his plummeting fall to stronger growth.

Then, daring pursuit, the parent raced on,
intent on schooling squirrel ways without respite;
tree to tree with chattering leaps of faith.

From limb to power line the parent jumped
beckoning the smaller to follow fast; the pupil,
leaping, slipped, then swung upright and froze:
the taut wire of risk lay suddenly clear
in the vastness of white opened air.

Father/mother? chastised hesitance with
warnings of dark omnipresent beast,
and ran the unforgiving wire quickly away.

The rodent/child, doubt crushed, wavered and fell,
clawing apathetic air to the street
where he lay and twice twitched, perhaps with thoughts
of soft/leaf nest and of drinking water.

Comments

12 responses to “Squirrel Narrative”

  1. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
    Jeremy Nathan Marks

    This is pretty darn marvelous, Leo. I really do think you capture in rhythm the movements of those squirrels.

    This stands out for me in particular:

    “snagged a limb-tip easing

    his plummeting fall to stronger growth and then

    pursued,”

    I like how you capture the tension in the fall, the rebound, and the springing back into the chase. This is a truly fun and bracing read because I can “fee” the chase, the many squirrely movements at work here.

    1. Leo Avatar

      Thanks, Jeremy. It sounds like I succeeded in my mission! Their lives can be just as dramatic as ours and sad. Leo

  2. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
    Jeremy Nathan Marks

    Reblogged this on The Sand County and commented:
    I think Leo really captured the movement of these squirrels in his verses. Since I live in a rodent-loving family I also had to share this.

    1. Leo Avatar

      Thanks for the reblog!

      1. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
        Jeremy Nathan Marks

        My pleasure. I loved reading this.

        I have a deep affection for squirrels (all animals, actually). But squirrels are definitely my neighbors and I was fortunate to have grown up with a backyard filled with tall, mature trees. Birds and squirrels (and rabbits, fox, and deer) have long been a central part of my life.

  3. faerieletters Avatar

    I love to pry into the minds of other writers, so please forgive the invasion, but why poetry/ i would love to understand why you choose poetry and how it forms within your mind?

    1. Leo Avatar

      Thank you for visiting! Regarding your inquiry; I am not a professional writer (as I’m sure you can tell) and have no ambitions to be one…as you know we have something, a need, I guess you could name it, to create. You, obviously, know that part….I’ve written some short stories but find after the excitment of the initial idea, the process of getting the character to go from point A to point B and maybe to point C becomes, for me, a chore. It is too much work!

      Poetry, on the other hand, is never a chore…I may work on a poem for a very long time or just a day and delight in every word or phrase; each word is important and not just a means to an end. A poem is more about the joruney itself and not the final destination; that’s the key, I guess! Please, visit again. Leo

  4. franzad Avatar

    this is just beautiful…i so enjoyed reading your poem. thank you.
    wish you a spectacular day!
    franza

    1. Leo Avatar

      Great to hear from you; thanks for reading! Leo

  5. ruleofstupid Avatar

    Great use of language here – but spasms of tail/ticktock
    and tendon/claw snagged a limb-tip
    and elsewhere – skittish and sounding like squirrely haste and stutter.
    Glad you killed the little bugger – It’s like you’ve already read my post for tonight 😉

    1. Leo Avatar

      Thanks for reading and commenting! I didn’t kill the poor “little bugger”; he was led down a wild, dangerous path by his elders! I tried to give mouth to mouth but it was too late. Leo

      1. ruleofstupid Avatar

        ew! I am posting Listerine…

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