My bones

Let my bones be better traveled after flesh has attended

and hindered.

Let them rattle on a string around the neck of creatures,

bold and roaming,

with beast hair, polished stones and a herbaceous plait;

charms healing.

Let my ribs protrude at a jaunty angle from plains, barren

and desiccated;

let them, though broken and hollowed, pick sonatas from hot

meandering winds

and with stealth and over-the-shoulder looks let the locals

gather to listen.

Let my femur be a gnaw bone for a she-wolf full bellied

and contented;

let her trot her bouncing-rear gait, muzzle lowered, wary

eyes intent,

to her suckling pups to share; accepting yelp-thanks with

long tongue caresses.

Let my skull be a prop held and caressed by sweaty hands

by those possessed;

let them hold my diminished, polished visage and declare,

“Alas, poor poet..”

and recite true the words of those aiming to discern order

from disorder.

Let a part of my bones be cast to burn and given to those

that love me;

let them with a final sigh of assent puff the dust leeward from

cupped palms

onto a receding tide to a current returning with no haste

to tropical shores.

Let me push my body bones up from this chair, away from

this screen;

let me walk across the room to the window and the scene

passing unaware,

and pressing against sun warmed panes leave hand prints;

flesh intact.

February 2002

Comments

18 responses to “My bones”

  1. Noel Ihebuzor Avatar

    Reblogged this on visionvoiceandviews and commented:
    Now this is poetry! Grips you till the last line!

    1. Leo Avatar

      I’m really overwhelmed. I don’t know what to say except thank you, so much for your support and reblog. Leo

  2. Noel Ihebuzor Avatar

    wow wow wow wow wow…..simple stunning this…really!

  3. Anne Avatar
    Anne

    PS I forgot to say – I also really love the humour running through this! πŸ™‚

  4. Anne Avatar
    Anne

    I had to read this a few times, just to savour all the images and feelings it provokes.
    Fantastic work, really amazing how you get that sense of time here – we travel through centuries and then return at the end to the man at the window, a journey both breathtaking and yet awesomely simple.
    At risk of hyperbole, you are such a *brilliant* poet, Leo, and a real inspiration to me – thank you. πŸ™‚

    1. Leo Avatar

      I’m really dumfounded. Thanks, so much, Anne. Coming from you, that means so much! Leo

  5. Leo Avatar

    I really don’t know what to say; your praise is too much, but I am so glad you liked it! Leo

  6. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
    Jeremy Nathan Marks

    I love this poem, Leo. Just love it. There is a nobility, even a form of omniscience in the speaker’s kindness that I just adore. And the vision you offer is so plural. . . which I think I love just as much, maybe even more.

    This is probably my favorite part:

    let them hold my diminished, polished visage and declare,

    β€œAlas, poor poet..”

  7. ruleofstupid Avatar

    This is simply wonderful… it elicits so much feeling and yearning, I feel interconnectedness, so many stories, ideas. Thank you for sharing πŸ™‚

    1. Leo Avatar

      Thanks, so much, for visiting and following…looking forward to talking with you and reading your post. Leo

  8. Susan L Daniels Avatar

    Reblogged this on Susan Daniels Poetry and commented:
    double, triple, quadruple wows.

  9. Susan L Daniels Avatar

    Oh, my God, Leo. My little scribbling reminded you of THIS? This is BEAUTIFUL, and true, and so resonates with a truth hard to vocalize but felt in the solar plexus. I have to reblog this.

    1. Leo Avatar

      Thank you, Susan, again! Do not belittle your “little scribbling”; I’ll often read some of your lines and wonder how in the heck you come up with some of the images especially as much as you produce! I work on some of my stuff for days or months and can not equal the quality of some of the poems you write. You are very inspirational to a lot of people! And thanks for reblogging! Leo

      1. Susan L Daniels Avatar

        Oh, thank you, Leo. Really appreciate that…I do think my muse is still making up for 17 years of silence–this has to slow down at some point. Pre-block, I would write something like 1-3 poems a month, and was happy to call myself a poet then. Have no idea what to call myself now–It is kind of like divine possession, and has been since April.

      2. Leo Avatar

        I’ve often berated myself, unsucessfully, for my lack of the kind of “passion” that would permit me to produce in an abundance, but we are what we are. I’ve lately come to accept that!. Leo

      3. Susan L Daniels Avatar

        Leo–I love what you produce, when you produce it. Passion has nothing to do with what I am producing–although I do love it passionately–it is an insistent whisper between the ears, demanding to be expressed.

      4. Leo Avatar

        To me that is passion even if you do hear voices for other places!

      5. Susan L Daniels Avatar

        πŸ™‚ OK, let’s call it that then…

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