Benediction in the doctor’s office

They climbed the steps one behind the other:

the mother in front clutching the rail,

daughter behind watching her mother’s feet;

easing each wary step by simple will.

Similar print dresses passed the knees hid

partially, overly muscular legs,

but the plainness of their faces needed

no paint; from pores and creases slandered as

 unsightly or crude, benevolence glowed,

 turning heads, almost in deference, drawn

to look and nod….even the rude and vain.

As the daughter signed her in, the mother

with a glance choose me to sit beside.  Blessed;

I followed her lead.   We talked of children

and having cared for our mothers in need.

Battered hand’s skin still tough, cracked, told of toil,

perhaps by choice, likely by circumstance,

but not one complaint against her life passed

full, unadorned lips, only sweetness and

praise of goodness and kindness of others.

Her name was called and with daughters’ help she

rose smiling, touching my hand in farewell.

I had glimpsed in her full moon face answers

for questions I could never even ask.

Comments

7 responses to “Benediction in the doctor’s office”

  1. Anne Avatar
    Anne

    Perfectly captured moment, Leo.
    The flow of this works so well, I think, to convey that sense of being carried along by something special, spiritual – call it what you will. Those internal rhymes appear like gifts through the poem and reflect what you’re expressing too – beautiful. 🙂

    1. Leo Avatar

      So glad to hear from you..thanks for reading! Leo

  2. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
    Jeremy Nathan Marks

    I like how much transpires here just through two people being in the same place for much the same reasons and then being proximate to one another.

    1. Leo Avatar

      This really happened with just a touch of enhancment. I felt blessed and happy for days. Leo

      1. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
        Jeremy Nathan Marks

        The truth and emotion of what you experienced really comes through in the poem. I immediately took to the kinship and the honesty.

  3. Susan L Daniels Avatar

    Leo, these lines:
    I had glimpsed in her full moon face answers

    for questions I could never even ask.

    All I can say is WOW.

    1. Leo Avatar

      Susan, thanks again for your continuing support; it means so much to me! Leo

Leave a reply to Anne Cancel reply