TC

tc

She’s gone for good this time…..I think.

I’ve not seem her for seven days.

Wet food collects slugs in her bowl; three days

of rain evicting them from danky hidey-holes.

That is the only sign. We rarely spoke

……or acknowledged the other.

I did stoop to offer my hand, a back-arching lintel,

……….but not too often; no spoiling.

She was a true hunter; eating her kill

with no gloating, no display for display’s sake.

She preferred the wild-wide-world, at least,

that’s what I tell myself……as balm,

but I really can’t know cat thought,

or human thought for that matter.

Others I’ve left to wander? Too aloof,

too free with freedom, or has it

just been easier to let them roam

so blame can only know their names?

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6 responses to “TC”

  1. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
    Jeremy Nathan Marks

    The closing is deeply touching. “have I been too unconcerned/too free with freedom” is such an elegant way of describing the dilemma you are talking about.

    I also like how it took time for me to be sure that you were writing about a cat. There was some suspense here.

  2. Audrey Howitt Avatar

    Loved this–and I agree with Susan, the end is very strong–

    1. Leo Avatar

      Thank you, Audrey, so much!

  3. Susan L Daniels Avatar

    Leo–this is great. love the close here–very strong.

    1. Leo Avatar

      Thanks, Susan, that means alot to me. Leo

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