Ambushed

Just an old man on a fast, healthful walk,

I was ambushed on quiet Magnolia Street;

my assailants, two boys, seven or eight,

flaunted their plastic guns from their dead yard.

One sprayed me from the hip, old-gangster style,

the other, took careful head and chest shots,

leering at me with deliberate calm.

Refusing to ordain their murder play,

the chest/clutching drama/death of feigned pain

on a twisted face, which they demanded;

I threw them my pain and a snubbing of

their killing fields, a dam/you/glare as only

an old man tired of rote/learning/games can.

Incessant perforations of the air

by forced/breathe bullets pursued me far past

my escape around the corner to Oak.

Their muddled voicings of derisive taunts

rent the air for my refusal to die.

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2 responses to “Ambushed”

  1. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
    Jeremy Nathan Marks

    This is powerful, Leo. And timely (sadly).

    I find this portion of your poem very provocative:

    “I threw them my pain and a snubbing of

    their killing fields, a dam/you/glare as only

    an old man tired of rote/learning/games can.”

    I am not sure what it is about this that grabs my attention the most, perhaps it is your refusal to indulge this kind of play.

  2. Susan L Daniels Avatar

    love how you ended yes

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