Let me go…three times

Haiku:

Let me go gently,

like a welcomed breeze at dusk;

a graceful exit.

Let me go..

Let me go….

Between pulses of pain,

frozen in a paralytic millisecond of bliss;

like a mammoth in ice,

mouth immovable in mid syllable,

forever

about to say something memorable.

Caregiver’s Lament:

Let me go after you are gone

if only for a little while;

when you are gone I will revert,

with little regret, even joy,

to indulgences I postponed

that I might be here to sooth you.

“You are my reason for living.”

a cliché so misunderstood,

has more to do with love and sad

obligation undertaken

 almost unnoticed ….but freely

and that wears, tears and can break will.

I crave to sniff, sip and savor

my hot, old bliss, irregardless

of how fleeting or injurious.

I give you all the world I have:

my true love without resentment;

I have your gratitude and love….

which barely suffices at times.

       

            

Comments

2 responses to “Let me go…three times”

  1. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
    Jeremy Nathan Marks

    For me, the three poems seem to turn on that image of the mammoth in ice in “Let me go.” The image of a life frozen in in its own midst is a very affecting one, especially when you use the senses to try and retrace “old bliss” in the third poem. These are all very strong, especially when read together.

    1. Leo Avatar

      Thanks again, Jeremy.

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